1. Unfortunately, I don't think that Sophia clearly connected her Boyce Park Greening and Beautification project with a sophisticated understanding of stewardship and civics.

2. It seems like she was just listing items from her resume... her involvement in tennis and her high GPA do not contribute to her community... unfortunately, her response does not compare to the impact of the other applicants

3. Again, more of a rudimentary response to the question... unfortunately not as reflective as others'... She seems to be crediting the YAP as what taught her how to communicate via email to adults? unclear.